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Bonsoir tout le monde,

Je fais appel à votre solidarité car j'aimerai avoir un avis sur un CV que je viens de rédiger en Anglais. Je souhaite surtout savoir s'il y a des erreurs ou non et bien sûr savoir si des améliorations peuvent être faites.

Merci d'avance.

Thomas JOSSOMME
39 rue Ducau
33000 Bordeaux, France
(+33) 684 222 078
thomasjossomme@hotmail.com

Date of birth: 23 october 1989
French Nationality
Driving licence

Professional objective: have a 6 months internship or more and work in a marketing department

Academic Qualifications
2009-2012 INSEEC Business School – Bordeaux, France
 Member of the Conférence des Grandes Ecoles
 Degree in Business Administration : 2nd year student of a 3-year programme which alternates intensive course work with placements in France and abroad and which prepares students for a career in International Business
 Specialization in strategic marketing management

2007-2009 University of Caen, France
 2-year university diploma in Sales and Marketing Techniques

2007-2006 Lycée Robert de Mortain – Mortain, France
 French Baccalauréat – Science major, equivalent to British A Levels.
Professional Experience
2010

November – December Boulanger, Bordeaux, France – Salesman
 Salesman in a TV department
 Developed negotiation skills and self-confidence
 2-month placement

June – August Freedman International, London, England – Finance Assistant
 Responsible of invoices and assistant for all the financial team
 Developed rigor and taught me the operation of an international company
 3-month placement

January POLYCOM, Fougères, France - Communications manager
 Establishment of communication tools for an association of hearing impaired
 1-month placement
 Developed leadership, organizational and interpersonal skills

2009

July – August CREDIT AGRICOLE, Pontorson, France – Commercial Assistant
 Reception customers in a bank
 Developed my communication skills and taught me the operation of a bank
 Summer Job

March – April DECATHLON, Caen, France – Organizer of an event
 Organization and promotion of a sports event
 Developed my ability to take decisions and manage an event and a team
 2-month placement

Sept – March MEMORIAL DE CAEN, Caen, France – Case Studies
 Customer satisfaction survey
 Developed leadership

2008

June BRICE, Avranches, France – Salesman
 Salesman in a clothing shop for men
 Developed my contact with people and taught me the importance of direct contact with customers
 1-month placement

Languages and Information Technology
 French: mother tongue
 English: fluent
 Spanish: middle level communication skills
 Chinese: Beginner

 Software: Word, Excel, Power Point, Sphinx

Personal Interests and Activities
 Treasurer of the national office of the M.H.I.G.E., a humanitarian organization (sponsored by French Management schools) which collects food and medicine and then organizes a convoy for Eastern Europe distribution
 Football, swimming
 Reading, movies